Thursday, 18 October 2018

Roll a story

In room 25 we have been learning how to write narratives and what to include in our narratives.here is our story we created together.


Character: ugly toad
setting: inside a hidden cave
problem: lost his memory


story:

In a cold freezing day a very ugly toad spotted a dark hidden cave. He went inside and then something  went pass him so quickly he only noticed a black shadow. He paused and searched around him, up top and outside. When he looked back he saw an ugly monster. The monster went through him his head was down he got back up and what he saw in the past was gone.

6 comments:

  1. Kia Ora, my name is Rowena i remember when i did something like this whoops and im from Owairaka school Rm 24 :) i really like the decreption about your post.
    Thanks for sharing your blog
    You can visit my blog. https://odsrowenap.blogspot.com/
    Blog you later!
    -Rowena

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  2. HI Rowena thanks for your comment i really appreciated it. And yea i will check out your blog.

    By Te tane
    Bllog you later.

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  3. Talofa Te Tane, my name is Taylah and I am a student from Owairaka school, I am a student in room 18. I really like this post it is a really nice story and it has a lot of description in it. If yo have any spare time check my blog out https://odstaylah-anet.blogspot.com/.
    Blog ya later.

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    1. Hi Taylah thanks for your comment i really appreciate it. And yea might check out your. Thanks

      By Te Tane
      Blog ya later

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  4. hello te tane my name is adam from room 8,I liked your story its not very long though so you should work on that.

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    1. KIa Ora Adam thank you for your comment i'm glad you made a comment. I am very happy.

      By Te Tane
      Blog ya later

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